Thursday, 1 November 2018

Stack em!!!

                            Stack’em
Aaahhh!!! Are you terrified with heights? Well I am. The scariest activity in camp was Stack ‘em. You guys might be wondering what the heck is Stack em? Well, it’s a depressing game for me. In Stack‘em there are 13 huge egg containers and you have to climb on them.I was wobbling so much that I looked like a shaky old lady trying to get her walking stick. It was almost like I was in high heels. I felt like I was falling off a humongous cliff but I was just on the third block. Holy cow, my legs were shaking. I felt like a dancing monkey.


After what seemed like a million centuries, I made it to the top of the world like a wiggly worm.

Then I started dancing like a psychopath. I am a psychopath but this is just another level. I loved it when I was on the top. Now time to jump. People say that the falling part was extremely fun.But I didn’t trust them because they were screaming as well. I did not care about anyone's comment. I just jumped and landed on the floor with a painful back.This was like a human cruelty game and my partner, yeah I can’t forget that kabuki. He literally said “Meesum, if you fall, then I’ll have a partner who lost.” If you ever get a partner like that, it’s just suicide.


This piece of writing was about Stack em' In this writing I shared
my feeling about Stack em.

Wednesday, 5 September 2018

Speeches/describing a motion

            Speeches/describing a motion

Yes, finally, the joyful moment I have been waiting for.For 3 whole days,This is my big moment,I raised my hand in excitement, oh oh me I helling loud voice.I was pumped, and I got picked to present my speech I was not at all neves, ok Meesum you are up. Yeah I shouted in my heart. I walked to the port of the room. I could feel the happens in my bones.I nearly fainted I was so happy, and then I started my speech.

Speech

Speech Judging Sheet


Name:                           Topic:
                   
Category
Main Points

Self Assessment
Low                                         High
1           2 3           4 5
Structure


 
My speech was organised logically into paragraphs, with an effective introduction and a conclusion.
5
Delivery


 
I used some gestures, stood still and made eye contact with my audience.


My voice was clear and loud.  I didn’t speak too quickly or too slowly.

5
Content
 
My speech had a message and was original, interesting and relevant to the audience.

5
Language

I used ‘powerful’ words in my speech.  I also included some language features (eg repetition, alliteration, similes etc)
4
Time

My speech was between 2 ½ and 3 ½ minutes long.
4



Next time I need to …
WRITE MORE detail


Teacher Comment

You had a strong introduction, involved the audience and spoke in a clear voice. Next time, more detail and eye contact will help strengthen your message. Well done.




Energy drinks
Put your hand up if you addicted to the delightful taste of energy drinks? Oh” man,as I expected. But that’s not a good thing, because those evil energy drinks could damage your precious teeth - well, no one's teeth are more precious than mine,like of course. By the way if you drink too much energy drinks  your teeth will look like Shrek’s teeth in photo, uhh. I’m sure not even one of you would like to look ugly.

Firstly let me tell you a mysterious story,tan tan tann, about a little handsome boy like me, who drank a lot of energy drinks oh. After you listen to this shocking story, whenever you well see an energy drink in your life, you will yell out “hell on bro.”  
Once there was a boy named Hunter.  He used to drink so much energy drinks that they rotted his teeth. It was just like his teeth turned from    
“beauty to the beast oh man i feel sorry for him. It was really sad to see a handsome boy who had a lovely smile with perfect teeth turn into a scary monster with missing teeth. Is this what you would like to end up like??? Imagine the dentist bills??? It will be so sad to lose your teeth when you are so young!

Secondly did you know that there’s 14 teaspoons of sugar in one bottle of energy drink. Honestly -  I don’t even know why energy drinks were made. I strongly agree that you should stop drinking energy drinks because they have so much sugar that it can turn you into a smiley
person with returned teeth ew gross!!! Now the choices is yours if you want to drink energy drinks.The design on the energy drink

I think I have conversed you eneff to not drink those posen's energy drinks, treat  me they are just called energy drinks they don’t give you energy instead they make you sick.So never drink energy drinks ever again!!!